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kyla samantha was going to the mall it was her 16th birthday. at the store she bought a head band. when she got home she put it on and wished she would have the perfect sweet 16 party ever, then the head band started to glow and a big bubble with her future sweet 16 party and what it would look like and it was PERFECT!!! she did not want to change a thing, but when christina ( the girl who hated samantha) was there and she ruend it. samantha was so mad she missed 7 months of school and her mother was mad... so she inrolled her in the school she went when she was a kid West Valley high. where she ended up living a happy life. the end.
Once upon a time… there was an 8 year old boy named Zak and he had a leg injury. But he loved karate he had a green belt yellow stripe. One day it was time for a tournament and Zak wanted to go.
Middle
But his dad wouldn’t let him because his foot injury. So he begged his dad and he said to Zak. If you prove to me that your leg injury won’t hurt you when you’re sparring then I will think about him. But then he said I can’t do this.
End
Something even with an injury you can still succeed in life. But then he noticed something even if something is wrong with you. You can succeed in life. So he told his dad. But his dad told him don’t give up. Try again
Beginning DJ’s dad was a scientist and the president was a evil guy (dad none as Jack)
Middle DJ was getting sick so Jack did a test on DJ and when jack got the results it said DJ had super powers what kind of super powers said DJ I don’t know said Jack
End The president made a giant robot he truned on and off the robot went DJ did his super power it was making shields and throwing shields and DJ bet the robot.
karanvir once upon a time there was a dad who was in war. He hit his head on a rock and lost his memory. JB did not know about it. His friends were in war with him and took him to the china hospital. Unforchintley he passed away his dads friends phoned JB's mom and JB's mom told JB. JB started to cry his mom stoped him from crying and told him to think about the good things and not the bad the end.
by damion once upon a time there was a cat and it has whit fur and it was nice it loves people so he is nice to people and Dressed up as a girl so people made fun at hem so he whant to bed and he was hugry so when he gotup he ate his food. And he ignore them. setting noe floor house in the living room in his bed room in the kitchen
Once there was a cat named tiger it was a good cat she was yellow and orger and also black she had big ears and she love to piay tag.
middle tiger also love too play friber tiger live in stoney creek with her family.Then one day tiger went to the park but then tiger saw something it was toby he was the mean's dog tiger had ever met.
End But then tiger's mom came and saved the day by chasing toby away and they lived happly ever after.
once upon a time there was a little boy. then her decided to go outside and play in the snow and make a snowman. then he wanted to make snowballs, but they fell apart. so he went inside and sat on the couch and grumbled and said "i'm mad"
Begining once there was a girl and her mom they were going to the zoo the mom called the girl from the car.
Middle when they got to the zoo they saw a tiger lion elephent and lots of animals.
End the girl wanted to see the lion but her mom said no first were going to see the elephent the girl did not want to go see the elephent. so the mom said okay but once we see the lion we are going to see the elephent the end.
once upon atime there was a man named phil who liked to play hockey but phil got boarded. he could not play hockey for two games.
phil was mad and he laid in bed for 2 weeks. he only got out of bed to feed his dog lily. his friends were worried.
when he was back at hockey he accidently hurt another hockey player he got a penalty and he felt bad after the game he said sorry the other player said it is okay and phil felt better
Once upon a time there was a boy named Zack. One day he went to school and he loved to go to gym. At gym they were playing pit stop and 4 corner dodge ball. His class loved to play games and so did he. One day Zack and his friend were playing dodge ball and they loved to play dodge ball and running games.
Middle
He had to go to a Kung – fu tournament and he was a yellow belt green stripe last year he got 10 1st place prizes. This year he wants to do the same thing because each year that he was doing Kung – fu he always got a first place trophy. It was very important to Zack and tomorrow he is going to class to practise for the tournament. He loved to do Kung – fu because his dad was a teacher for Kung – fu.
End
His dad called Zack to get ready for the tournament and now they were in the car and all ready starting to drive it took them about 1 hour and 30 minutes. Finally when they got there his dad was paying the money for the tickets and then he went in the room and it was humongous and he said whoa he was surprised how many people there were in the tournament and then he started to fight and then he did patterns he got first in both he was very excited.
Beginning: I was getting ready to go to my wedding in a church and it was in the afternoon I was so excited to get married but I cant find a wedding dress for me.
Middle: so I am going to buy one but I don’t know ware so I am going to search it but internet dose’nt work oh no I am going to ruined the wedding but then she tried to call her friend and she said I do`nt no ware you can buy a dress.
End: then her husband came in the house and he said I bought you an dress and not just a dress but a wedding dress she said let me see and she did have a wedding dress
Dear Grade threes I miss you all very much, I read some of your stories on your blog and you all did a great job! I can't wait to come and do more drama you guys. I will see you all in April and i will be reading your blog as often as i can. From: Amber
kyla
ReplyDeletesamantha was going to the mall it was her 16th birthday. at the store she bought a head band. when she got home she put it on and wished she would have the perfect sweet 16 party ever, then the head band started to glow and a big bubble with her future sweet 16 party and what it would look like and it was PERFECT!!! she did not want to change a thing, but when christina ( the girl who hated samantha) was there and she ruend it. samantha was so mad she missed 7 months of school and her mother was mad... so she inrolled her in the school she went when she was a kid West Valley high. where she ended up living a happy life.
the end.
Story Ideas Gurjot Wednesday, February, 24, 2011
ReplyDeleteBeginning
Once upon a time… there was an 8 year old boy named Zak and he had a leg injury. But he loved karate he had a green belt yellow stripe. One day it was time for a tournament and Zak wanted to go.
Middle
But his dad wouldn’t let him because his foot injury. So he begged his dad and he said to Zak. If you prove to me that your leg injury won’t hurt you when you’re sparring then I will think about him. But then he said I can’t do this.
End
Something even with an injury you can still succeed in life. But then he noticed something even if something is wrong with you. You can succeed in life.
So he told his dad. But his dad told him don’t give up. Try again
Super boy
ReplyDelete(super hero name)
(None as DJ)
Beginning
DJ’s dad was a scientist and the president was a evil guy
(dad none as Jack)
Middle
DJ was getting sick so Jack did a test on DJ and when jack got the results it said DJ had super powers what kind of super powers said DJ I don’t know said Jack
End
The president made a giant robot he truned on and off the robot went DJ did his super power it was making shields and throwing shields and DJ bet the robot.
Quinton
karanvir once upon a time there was a dad who was in war. He hit his head on a rock and lost his memory. JB did not know about it. His friends were in war with him and took him to the china hospital. Unforchintley he passed away his dads friends phoned JB's mom and JB's mom told JB. JB started to cry his mom stoped him from crying and told him to think about the good things and not the bad the end.
ReplyDeleteby damion once upon a time there was a cat and it has whit fur and it was nice it loves people so he is nice to people and Dressed up as a girl so people made fun at hem so he whant to bed and he was hugry so when he gotup he ate his food. And he ignore them.
ReplyDeletesetting noe floor house in the living room in his bed room in the kitchen
Beggining
ReplyDeleteOnce there was a cat named tiger it was a good cat she was yellow and orger and also black she had big ears and she love to piay tag.
middle
tiger also love too play friber tiger live in stoney creek with her family.Then one day tiger went to the park but then tiger saw something it was toby he was the mean's dog tiger had ever met.
End
But then tiger's mom came and saved the day by chasing toby away and they lived happly ever after.
by adis
ReplyDeleteonce upon a time there was a little boy. then her decided to go outside and play in the snow and make a snowman. then he wanted to make snowballs, but they fell apart. so he went inside and sat on the couch and grumbled and said "i'm mad"
Begining
ReplyDeleteonce there was a girl and her mom they were going to the zoo the mom called the girl from the car.
Middle
when they got to the zoo they saw a tiger lion elephent and lots of animals.
End the girl wanted to see the lion but her mom said no first were going to see the elephent the girl did not want to go see the elephent. so the mom said okay but once we see the lion we are going to see the elephent the end.
by adam
ReplyDeleteonce upon atime there was a man named phil who liked to play hockey but phil got boarded. he could not play hockey for two games.
phil was mad and he laid in bed for 2 weeks. he only got out of bed to feed his dog lily. his friends were worried.
when he was back at hockey he accidently hurt another hockey player he got a penalty and he felt bad after the game he said sorry the other player said it is okay and phil felt better
the end
Gurjot Monday, February, 28, 2011
ReplyDeleteStory ideas
Beginning
Once upon a time there was a boy named Zack. One day he went to school and he loved to go to gym. At gym they were playing pit stop and 4 corner dodge ball. His class loved to play games and so did he. One day Zack and his friend were playing dodge ball and they loved to play dodge ball and running games.
Middle
He had to go to a Kung – fu tournament and he was a yellow belt green stripe last year he got 10 1st place prizes. This year he wants to do the same thing because each year that he was doing Kung – fu he always got a first place trophy. It was very important to Zack and tomorrow he is going to class to practise for the tournament. He loved to do Kung – fu because his dad was a teacher for Kung – fu.
End
His dad called Zack to get ready for the tournament and now they were in the car and all ready starting to drive it took them about 1 hour and 30 minutes. Finally when they got there his dad was paying the money for the tickets and then he went in the room and it was humongous and he said whoa he was surprised how many people there were in the tournament and then he started to fight and then he did patterns he got first in both he was very excited.
Marie
ReplyDeleteBeginning:
I was getting ready to go to my wedding in a church and it was in the afternoon I was so excited to get married but I cant find a wedding dress for me.
Middle:
so I am going to buy one but I don’t know ware so I am going to search it but internet dose’nt work oh no I am going to ruined the wedding but then she tried to call her friend and she said I do`nt no ware you can buy a dress.
End:
then her husband came in the house and he said I bought you an dress and not just a dress but a wedding dress she said let me see and she did have a wedding dress
Dear Grade threes
ReplyDeleteI miss you all very much, I read some of your stories on your blog and you all did a great job! I can't wait to come and do more drama you guys. I will see you all in April and i will be reading your blog as often as i can.
From: Amber
thank you Amber we are doing a lot of stuf i love to and i love you geys to so what are you doing in your calss from Damion
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